Once there was 3 amazing best friends they went for a long walk. They found an old Scary lab with old mouldy bacteria inside. Star went into the Old scary lab. She became a Creepy villain. She had disgusting bacteria all over her. Me and Ariana ran so fast because we were so scared. We did not know what happened to star. Me and Ariana went to our treehouse and when we got up there there were so many bacteria in our treehouse. We thought it was star and it was. We sore Star covered with bacteria. We found a cure for star. We tried to make Star drink the cure but She didn't drink the cure. Then Star tried to make us have bacteria so we could be sick and maybe die. Me and Arina were so scared. We ran so SO fast to our treehouse. But then we realized that it was covered with bacteria. We didn't know where to go so we could be safe. We had a plan to make star drink the cure. But we needed help so it could work. But me and Arana did not know how to help us. But then I knew how to help us and that person is shell. A very old friend. She ran so fast to help us. Then we sore Star. Star came Close to me and Arana and shell. It looked like she wanted to drink the cure. Star took the cure off my hand and drank it. She Was our friend again. THE END
Wednesday, September 2, 2020
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Hi Alyssa, I like the topic of the story. In some places you wrote Ariana and then in some places you wrote Arana. Next time reread your work and make sure it all makes sense. Good job Alyssa.
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